tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post6807275550138891464..comments2023-05-18T03:00:50.326-07:00Comments on Poetry of Flesh: Poetry of Fleshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-65764060689565134422010-02-15T14:41:27.109-08:002010-02-15T14:41:27.109-08:00Savage,
I already said it on your blog, but I'...Savage,<br /><br />I already said it on your blog, but I'll say it here as well. I do love the rhythm of this poem, it's gorgeously spaced out, total beat in my head while reading it. <3Poetry of Fleshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-42401718844419395892010-02-12T19:50:59.294-08:002010-02-12T19:50:59.294-08:00I know we'll probably ever meet so can't t...I know we'll probably ever meet so can't take you out for umm wait.. you don't drink coffee anymore.... okay so I can't take you out to eat so you can show me how to eat artichoke... but anyways since we probably won't meet I did something else instead. I wrote poem for you. I posted it on my blog but I don't know if you peruse the latest one as of yet so I thought I'd deliver said poem here.... <br /><br />On the Floor<br /><br />It aint hard to find that beat<br />The lilting, tilting, wicked rhythm<br />The razor edge, fine line trance<br />The gizmo dancer, rocking schism<br /><br />Just synchronize your body vibes<br />Shuffle down with the dance floor hustle<br />Move to the groove to rhythm to the beat<br />Flexing bad ass dance floor muscle<br /><br />Glow-stick flashing, fancy freedom<br />The hypno-spastic, elastic grooving<br />Drum bass licking lung vibration<br />Lurching, rhythmic body moving<br /><br />Clockwork, grinding, dancing gears<br />Tick and tock and winding, weaving<br />Acrobatic light fantastic<br />Watchers watching breathless breathing<br /><br />Shakers shaking the shindig shuffle<br />Electro-sexy techno thumping<br />Sweat baptized in the ballroom blitz<br />Keep on moving, the beat keeps jumping<br /><br />-Mark “The Savage” GeorgeThe Savagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13743715158080363222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-14425889196928770132010-02-11T22:38:49.149-08:002010-02-11T22:38:49.149-08:00Jeez, could I have made a longer comment? Sorry.
...Jeez, could I have made a longer comment? Sorry.<br /><br /><br />Doug1,<br /><br />Yes, if only we hadn't split in December. I wish I could keep hammering at his shell, but I won't. Too much love and respect for him.Poetry of Fleshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-28161538737016227412010-02-11T22:38:27.462-08:002010-02-11T22:38:27.462-08:0011minutes,
My posts are ridiculously long, I know...11minutes,<br /><br />My posts are ridiculously long, I know. I'm trying to stop being so repetitive, cut them down a bit, but it's not really working.<br /><br />What I'm doing is actually helping me find my ideal partner. Yes, I know that most women, myself included, desire high status males. But there is more than status that I desire in a partner, significantly more that I've found next to impossible to find.<br /><br />I know that you look at what women desire, and the tactics that they employ to snag the man of their dreams. These are things you need to know in order to snag your Average Operating Female.<br /><br />And those women are out to snag the highest status Average Operating Male that they can find.<br /><br />If you ever met me, examined how I interact with men, you'd find that I take an entirely different set of tactics, based on my own personality and my male-based needs. I constantly advocate to my female friends, we have to become the bait for the kind of man we desire.<br /><br />Fortunately for me, I'm already geared in that direction. I don't have to put a lot of work into tagging my guys.<br /><br />Which brings us back to me "willfully from finding happiness". If I'm sexually satisfied, not prone to clinging, aware of my desirability, putting off that "relationship-content" vibe that people do when they are in a relationship (especially newly so)... I'm golden. It may not seem so to you, it may seem like I'm coming off as an overly confident ball-busting lawyer-type who secretly fantasizes about having a man take care of her.<br /><br />I do not want an imbalanced relationship. I do not want a man who feels as though he has to impress me. I do not want to be with a man who desires a woman to lean on him, bat her eyes, and call him into the kitchen to crush spiders. I do not want someone who is intimidated by me, who finds my sexuality more than they can handle.<br /><br />It's an excellent screening process.<br /><br />So, yes, I take lovers. I take wonderful men whose company I enjoy, whose bodies I enjoy, but who I know I would have a fruitless relationship with. We're friends who share bodies, share time and experiences, without the romance or long-term intention. And when I find someone or they find someone, we continue our friendship... platonically.<br /><br />And you're, at least, partially right. My last boyfriend was Mr. Sex God. Variety was key. Which is what swing clubs are for. But now I'm working on another highly active male who is looking towards the monogamous lifestyle. He's not my sort of relationship material, but he does fit the sexual profile of a desirable male (to me). But he's monogamous, wants that long-term relationship ending in marriage.<br /><br />It does happen. Rarely.<br /><br />Just like girls like me happen. Rarely.<br /><br />My post wasn't about attacking PUAs, but trying to shrug off a mindset. When I spend too much time in one social group, I start picking up value systems, and it takes me writing it out to go back to my baseline.<br /><br />And I don't think PUAs are pathetic. I think they're lovely, actually. Men recognizing a minor or major failing in themselves and taking steps to learn and grow. What I do find sad is when they get so jaded and cynical about what they experience by picking up women, the general misogyny that springs, as well as the incredible sexual biases. It's so damaged, so harmful, creates horrible behaviors, and I never can figure out who I feel more sorry for when it comes to gender roles.<br /><br />I actually wrote a wonderful article on the Madonna/Whore syndrome last year, on my other blog. Incredibly well received, wish I could link it. I know what it is, I know what it means, and it's an excellent sign of male inexperience and feelings of inadequacy. It's one of my filters when screening males, if I can create the right situation. Drop them like a sack of bricks if they don't pass, I don't have the time to go about educating them to what the "real world" looks like.Poetry of Fleshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-60830685033997072502010-02-11T19:36:08.889-08:002010-02-11T19:36:08.889-08:00I'm glad you belatedly followed my advice.
No...I'm glad you belatedly followed my advice.<br /><br />Not sure how this will end w/GV8 but am sure that it was something you needed to (or should for your happiness/development fully and not so reservedly/self protectively explore.Doug1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-56900088110806740352010-02-11T19:26:42.308-08:002010-02-11T19:26:42.308-08:00To be fair, I haven't read many of your posts....To be fair, I haven't read many of your posts. Not that they're poorly written. They're just too tl;dr for my tastes. <br /><br />But what I read from you, I found intriguing. Your constant naval gazing is characterized by this inner conflict that I now understand is deeply rooted in your tragic personal history.<br /><br />This is what <a href="http://alpha-status.blogspot.com/2010/02/women-are-all-same-iv.html?showComment=1265661377772#c7455631015944678787" rel="nofollow">you posted on my blog</a> a few days ago:<br />"All I've ever wanted was a long-term partner, one person to have sex with, one man I could respect and trust. I no longer have need for variety in my bed, I'm quite content without it, I know this from experience."<br /><br />And now you tell me that you keep yourself willfully from finding happiness in fulfilling your dream of being with a steady partner?<br /><br />I take it that you believe that you are "progressing" towards him. Finding better and better men by dating up the scale or something like that. You also alluded at just "taking lovers" while you wait (for a better future?). <br /><br />You say your final partner will be a man who will not be (to use your words) "intimidated" by your sexual history. What I find amazing is that you really seem to believe that any such man would stop enjoying variety and instead watch you get old and unattractive?<br /><br />This really fascinates me. It really does. Otherwise I would not waste my time commenting.<br /><br />It is also interesting that you first tell yourself that you still are attractive (which is beside the point - because it will not last forever), and then you launch into a counter attack against PUAs (who are indeed so pathetic that they provide an easy target). Why do you need to do that? Why did you wonder about all that at all? <br /><br />I believe it is because finding out more about the repercussions of the Madonna/Whore syndrome that plagues us men pushes a button deep inside you. You are a very self reflecting and analytical person. And it is because of that that you sense that what I am saying is not without ground.11minuteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14130549246865305841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-47036346423812670982010-02-11T18:36:03.615-08:002010-02-11T18:36:03.615-08:0011minutes,
Oh, I'm adorably sweet most of the...11minutes,<br /><br />Oh, I'm adorably sweet most of the time.<br /><br />Actually, I try not to get into relationships most of the time. I pick lovers, men I do not want to date, and live my life until I smack into someone who wants to nail me down. No, not in that way. If you're basing it off of men I've "ended up with" sexually, yes, I constantly end up with men who don't want to settle down which is wonderful because I don't want them. My lovers greatly outnumber my relationships, but all of my relationships were long-term, two of them co-habitating.<br /><br />Things won't magically change. There's no change to needing be had. I grow and progress so much each year, better and better men find me, want to be with me. I have to fight off the symptoms of serial monogamy because I keep getting taken off the market and I need to be alone for once, without a man in my life.<br /><br />I think you're reading me wrong, or haven't read me at all. It'd be nice if you were able to open up a bit, gather information without judgement, without bias. You're a smart man, I enjoy your blog. You're more than you present yourself, smarter than the prejudices you've built.Poetry of Fleshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-52767839959506860162010-02-11T10:53:21.649-08:002010-02-11T10:53:21.649-08:00I like that Mother Hen thing of yours. Shows your ...I like that Mother Hen thing of yours. Shows your sweet side.<br /><br />The thing is, you obviously are quite conflicted about all that. <br /><br />What I take is that you really want a man for good, but you constantly end up with guys who have no interest settling down with you. And your clock is ticking.<br /><br />I understand that you like to think that all is okay, and things will magically change sometime somehow. But empty "fell good" platitudes from others won't help you in the long run. You are a smart woman, you know that.11minuteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14130549246865305841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-50748115690852433122010-02-10T16:32:45.759-08:002010-02-10T16:32:45.759-08:00Firepower,
Aw, you're going to make me blush....Firepower,<br /><br />Aw, you're going to make me blush.Poetry of Fleshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-72703622182451395692010-02-10T11:27:44.509-08:002010-02-10T11:27:44.509-08:00It's not my job to make you comfortable.
Nice...It's not my job to make you comfortable.<br /><br />Nice response though - it's like you're taking us all on at once. niceFirepowernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-55257219599259477662010-02-09T21:50:16.476-08:002010-02-09T21:50:16.476-08:00Savage,
That was a brilliant, completely unexpect...Savage,<br /><br />That was a brilliant, completely unexpected response. I salute you and your humor.<br /><br />Rider,<br /><br />I had forgotten that, I've been so immersed in the meshing worlds of evo-psych and pick-up for the last year that I had forgotten why I had come to prize the men I do. It's not a matter of responsibility, it's more so I do not feel like I'm taking advantage of my partners. I'll likely write a post on this, once I finish mulling it over. Thanks for the inspiration.<br /><br />11minutes,<br /><br />If you can't place nice with the others, mister, I'll end recess early and you'll go straight to time-out.<br /><br />Aldonza,<br /><br />You're always such a grounding influence for me. I get too wrapped up in these ideas, testing theories, applying mindsets, to experiment and see what other ways I can look at things, that I forget myself, forget what these men look like to others.<br /><br />Marriage to a standard-issue PUA? Eesh. I'll pass. You up for a game of hot potato?<br /><br />Firepower,<br /><br />That sentiment coming from you is mildly disturbing, so I'm hoping the reference that I do not understand in the second part of your comment makes it at least a minor insult so I feel more comfortable.Poetry of Fleshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-89306740419950621972010-02-09T12:46:10.856-08:002010-02-09T12:46:10.856-08:00POF will make a great mother someday.
ta republiq...POF will make a great mother someday.<br /><br />ta republiqueFirepowernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-39102567590856371402010-02-09T12:42:30.314-08:002010-02-09T12:42:30.314-08:00The seduction community's opinion of the fate ...The seduction community's opinion of the fate of women is at times amusing, depressing, insightful and ludicrous. It's almost like they truly believe that there is a "Logan's Run" of beta marriage for any woman who dares not marry by 23, the first 30+ year old self-made alpha who will have her. <br /><br />How dare you not step in line with the rest of the sexually viable women, forced to choose either the "cumdumpster/beta wife/worn-out cougar" line or the "virtuous/worthy of marriage to one of them" line!<br /><br />PS., You got an actual "LOL" at the "beta brains" comment!Sharonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12445558988316054957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-12318150117135146622010-02-09T12:06:21.544-08:002010-02-09T12:06:21.544-08:00You limit yourself to very experienced men because...<i>You limit yourself to very experienced men because they're the only ones who can responsibly handle your beauty, brains, and sexuality.</i><br /><br />Thanks for the laugh.11minuteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14130549246865305841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-3115748252010504472010-02-09T10:56:45.782-08:002010-02-09T10:56:45.782-08:00Hey, Poetry, this is a great posting, the last six...Hey, Poetry, this is a great posting, the last six paragraphs especially so. Thanks for the good laugh. <br /><br />Yesterday, you made a fleeting reference to your "ethical code." In a way, this posting is about your code too, and what it means for the future. <br /><br />Those who don't believe in your code paint you a dim future. I'm reminded of fundamentalist "fire and brimstone" preachers: "Ye shall be condemned to Hell for all eternity!" However, your interlocutors are deprived of a fiery hell, and so they conjure up a bag lady instead. <br /><br />No chance of that happening. <br /><br />When I first read about your ever-shrinking pool of acceptable men, I thought, "Why doesn't Poetry just teach sexual techniques to other, less experienced men? That way, her universe of available men grows greater as she gains more experience." It was an obvious answer, one I knew you thought of long before I did. <br /><br />You answered my question in this posting. It's in this sentence, isn't it? "The more [your guy friends] get to know [you], the harder they fall, until [you're] sitting there near praying that they get a girlfriend so [you] don't have to find [yourself] in another awkward social situation." <br /><br />It's your ethical code again. You limit yourself to very experienced men because they're the only ones who can responsibly handle your beauty, brains, and sexuality.Riderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17733815021367401385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-75212008029612693682010-02-09T10:15:37.184-08:002010-02-09T10:15:37.184-08:00I'm more of a theta male... you know.. the ban...I'm more of a theta male... you know.. the bandwidth of conscious just before REM sleep... Basically lucid dreaming... though still awake....The Savagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13743715158080363222noreply@blogger.com