tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post7374795908073903983..comments2023-05-18T03:00:50.326-07:00Comments on Poetry of Flesh: Don't drive me blind...Poetry of Fleshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-69219063808748336092010-03-10T21:32:19.128-08:002010-03-10T21:32:19.128-08:00Savage,
I've... never read any Hemingway. At...Savage,<br /><br />I've... never read any Hemingway. At all. I'm sadly lacking in the education department at times. It's interesting and cool, your evaluation. I can't tell the difference between the two sections, but you can. Fascinating.<br /><br />Dan,<br /><br />Yeah, he realized he wanted to avoid this situation just a little bit ago. Yay.<br /><br />Aldonza,<br /><br />I think you might be my hero. Always bringing me back to earth.<br /><br />Hannah,<br /><br />I'm still a bit amazed at our linkage last night, reading each other at the same time, and the same song. Simple things, easy coincidence, but then... not so much.<br /><br />I hope that's not the last time I get to dance with him.Poetry of Fleshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00871932715491205605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-84495715462786789742010-03-09T22:07:03.826-08:002010-03-09T22:07:03.826-08:00"We slow danced in the partially finished BDS..."We slow danced in the partially finished BDSM room, illuminated by a set of construction lights, footprints in sawdust, his hands roaming over my back, his face in the curve of my neck, then my hair, inhaling."<br /><br />I love that you are partially finished with what I always dreamed<br />to have and that I felt <br />very much present <br />in the romance of sawdust <br />here.hmla2599https://www.blogger.com/profile/13059799766743811221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-5415346884835451882010-03-09T22:03:28.597-08:002010-03-09T22:03:28.597-08:00Holy fuck.
I haven't even gotten a chance to...Holy fuck. <br /><br />I haven't even gotten a chance to read this in full, but after my initial scan, i needed to stop in my tracks<br /><br />and tell you that I am listening to <br /><br />Fade into you<br /><br />at this very second.hmla2599https://www.blogger.com/profile/13059799766743811221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-89755424873351015942010-03-09T13:05:12.062-08:002010-03-09T13:05:12.062-08:00Toss me into an unsteady or undefined relationship...<i>Toss me into an unsteady or undefined relationship, I immediately become edgy, anxious.</i><br /><br />Um...that's you and the rest of the population.Sharonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12445558988316054957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-23155699560071338062010-03-09T09:19:24.814-08:002010-03-09T09:19:24.814-08:00"We talked about GV8, and about me. How GV8 c..."We talked about GV8, and about me. How GV8 called me needy the other night, and how much that bothered me.<br /><br />She said that I wasn't needy. And... I remembered... I'm not.<br /><br />...<br /><br />GV8 has put me into a highly emotional, insecure situation. So I'm being anxious, fighting my need to cling to him for stability he cannot offer me."<br /><br />i've experienced something similar. To me it felt like being cast in a role I didn't want to play in the first place and then being blamed for playing it out.<br /><br />I marvel at peoples' ability to create the exact situation they claim to be trying to avoid.Dan_Brodribbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14026291343082142533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3186930289760870447.post-953205880773532002010-03-09T07:12:42.224-08:002010-03-09T07:12:42.224-08:00Up until this point in your post "He was wron...Up until this point in your post "He was wrong.", your writing had a certain Hemingway appeal to it. There was a relaxed, confidence that I haven't read since the 5th grade when I read "The Old Man and the Sea".<br />I have a feeling that whatever it is you're writing is going to be an awesome read, whatever the chosen genre.<br /><br />The rest of the post was your regular, quirky style that I have loved from the start....The Savagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13743715158080363222noreply@blogger.com